Professional Developmental Editing

The Big-Picture Guidance Your Story Deserves

Developmental editing is the first and most important stage once you’ve completed a full draft of your manuscript. This service focuses on the foundation of your story—its structure, pacing, character development, narrative flow, and overall cohesion.

Whether you are writing fiction, memoir, or non-fiction, I'll provide honest, constructive feedback to help you transform your manuscript into the strongest version of itself while preserving your unique voice and vision.

After reviewing your manuscript, you will receive a detailed editorial report outlining both major and minor issues, along with clear, actionable guidance for revision. This stage may involve reworking scenes, refining character arcs, or restructuring sections of your manuscript—but it is where your book truly begins to take its final shape.

Common areas assessed include:

·         Plot holes and narrative inconsistencies

·         Character development and emotional arcs

·         Story pacing, tension, and momentum

·         Scene structure and transitions

·         Point of view and narrative voice

·         Verb tense and structural consistency

·         Dialogue, tone, and authenticity

·         Descriptive writing and sensory detail

·         Chapter flow and reader engagement

·         Backstory integration and information pacing

·         Language clarity and emotional resonance

This is a collaborative and transformative process. You will walk away with a stronger manuscript—and a clearer understanding of your writing for future projects.

Pricing

Price is per word. $0.09 for standard delivery, or $0.12 for priority delivery. Instead of using the + symbol to add your word count, simply select the number field and type in your word count.